Early

,

light
passing
torn clouds
palm leaf rags
tattered hut
poverty
a man
into

rice fields out the window of the bus

© 2017 Melinda J. Irvine
Photo Challenge: Reflecting
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8 responses to “Early”

  1. Susan W Goldstein Avatar
    Susan W Goldstein

    Your love of this country and the people is so apparent in your beautiful poetry and gorgeous photos.

    1. Melinda J. Irvine Avatar
      Melinda J. Irvine

      Thanks so much for stopping by and noticing my poems. I do love this country very much, it has and is affecting me very deeply. mel.

  2. LynDurante Avatar
    LynDurante

    Such a great poem and photo there Mel. Thank you for transporting me with you. My mind flies there now. xxx Lyn

  3. ksbeth Avatar
    ksbeth

    this is beautiful, melinda

    1. Melinda J. Irvine Avatar
      Melinda J. Irvine

      thanks so much, i’ve been working on this poem for a long time. it something i see so much and am always trying to find ways to capture the beauty as well as the sadness of it. mel.

  4. SauceBox Avatar
    SauceBox

    Love it! Great stuff! You’ve got my follow. Check out my comedy blog and give it a follow if you like it!

    1. Melinda J. Irvine Avatar
      Melinda J. Irvine

      Thanks Saucebox for checking in, appreciate the follow. I did like your little sister’s girlberry syrup 🙂

      1. SauceBox Avatar
        SauceBox

        Thank you I’m glad you enjoyed that one! 😄