Abandoned

picturing
rain falls
abandoned

cacophony
(stepping back)
soiled diapers

the smell
human piss
stepping further

further further
back, looking up
into what

looking back
into what
into once

into when
looking back
seeing

© 2017 Melinda J. Irvine


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Melinda J. Irvine is a professional writer, small business owner, and daily blogger — helping real people like you find their voice and share their burning message with the world. In her spare time, Mel is busy building (and writing) a free online learning centre for marginalised kids in the Philippines.

2 comments

    1. Thanks Mery, it’s a lovely old building. A shame it is being used as a rubbish dump and toilet. xx

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