picturing
rain falls
abandoned

cacophony
(stepping back)
soiled diapers

the smell
human piss
stepping further

further further
back, looking up
into what

looking back
into what
into once

into when
looking back
seeing

© 2017 Melinda J. Irvine


2 responses to “Abandoned”

  1. us4p Avatar

    Ice pics, nice poem

    1. Melinda J. Irvine Avatar
      Melinda J. Irvine

      Thanks Mery, it’s a lovely old building. A shame it is being used as a rubbish dump and toilet. xx