among the steady
trill of motors, beats, our time
we are all, just waiting to go home

waiting to go home

Everyone waits for someone. Who do you wait for? Why do we? Wait?

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6 responses to “Waiting To Go Home”

  1. Susan W Goldstein Avatar

    Lovely rhythm to the rhyme!

    1. Melinda J. Irvine Avatar

      thanks, the people in that little motor cart were wonderful inspiration.

  2. ksbeth Avatar

    yes – and wonderful shot

    1. Melinda J. Irvine Avatar

      thanks, it was one of those beautiful random moments and i’m grateful for how it unfolded. m.

  3. corazon181 Avatar

    Beautiful! Yes, we are all just waiting to go home. <3

    1. Melinda J. Irvine Avatar

      thanks for the lovely comment. xx