Waiting To Go Home

by Melinda J. Irvine28 January 201827 January 2018 6 Comments

among the steady
trill of motors, beats, our time
we are all, just waiting to go home

Daily Post: Trill
I’m part of Post A Day 2018
Location: Balasan, Iloilo (Philipppines)

Written by Melinda J. Irvine

Melinda J. Irvine is a freelance writer, poet, and blogger — writing slick sales copy for clients from all over the world. And blogging poetry. In her spare time, Mel is busy building (and writing) a free online learning centre for the marginalised kids of Estancia, Philippines.

6 comments

Susan W Goldstein says:

29 January 2018 at 1:00 am

Lovely rhythm to the rhyme!

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1. Melinda J. Irvine says:
  
  29 January 2018 at 12:27 pm
  
  thanks, the people in that little motor cart were wonderful inspiration.
  
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ksbeth says:

28 January 2018 at 5:05 pm

yes – and wonderful shot

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1. Melinda J. Irvine says:
  
  29 January 2018 at 12:27 pm
  
  thanks, it was one of those beautiful random moments and i’m grateful for how it unfolded. m.
  
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corazon181 says:

28 January 2018 at 3:04 pm

Beautiful! Yes, we are all just waiting to go home. <3

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1. Melinda J. Irvine says:
  
  29 January 2018 at 12:26 pm
  
  thanks for the lovely comment. xx
  
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